Date of publication: 2017-07-09 00:08
Reader: You can write this section by inferring who the intended reader is, as well as looking at the text from the viewpoint of other sorts of readers. For example,
some times I confuse in detect the topic in opinion essay, for example in this question:
(Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.). I have confused if the topic is (inability of local business to compete) and other information is supporting or it is (closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities) , so how can I identify the main topic in such question ?
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I need an advice from u. Is it possible to add an data or information to the body of essay writing task 7, but I 8767 m not sure about the validity of the data? Or in easy way, could I put unvalid data on the essay?
Hello Liz, hope you are a having a good day. I noticed that in conclusion, you have stated 8766 local communities should do more. 8767 However, my English teacher taught us that we should never state a new idea in conclusion, instead we should summarize the main content. Can you please explain me, which is correct or if i am wrong or mistaken about it.
No, definitely not. The academic writing task 7 is really testing your ability to use appropriate vocabulary which means most idioms are not accepted (not all but most).
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when all the points are accounted , i suggest that government and society should come together and make resolution to not to harm enviroment and decide to promote aforestation as luxury should sacrificed for better future.
There is no current proof that advancing technology will deteriorate the ability of humans to think. On the contrary, advancements in technology had advanced our vast knowledge in many fields, opening opportunities for further understanding and achievement. For example, the problem of dibilitating illnesses and diseases such as alzheimer's disease is slowing being solved by the technological advancements in stem cell research. The future ability of growing new brain cells and the possibility to reverse the onset of alzheimer's is now becoming a reality. This shows our initiative as humans to better our health demonstrates greater ability of humans to think.
In all actuality, I think it is more probable that our bodies will surely deteriorate long before our minds do in any significant amount. Who can't say that technology has made us lazier, but that's the key word, lazy, not stupid. The ever increasing amount of technology that we incorporate into our daily lives makes people think and learn every day, possibly more than ever before. Our abilities to think, learn, philosophize, etc. may even reach limits never dreamed of before by average people. Using technology to solve problems will continue to help us realize our potential as a human race.
In conclusion, while it can be argued that too much emphasis is placed on a university education, my own opinion is that the university years are a crucial time for personal development. If people enter the workplace aged 68, their future options may be severely restricted. Attending university allows them time to learn more about themselves and make a more appropriate choice of career.
The problem with me is that when I practice for speaking test in front of mirror or someone else, ideas and sentences generated in my mind but unable to pick proper word sometimes. This creats a long pause.
What to do?
Apart from this, the equally significant factor which emerges out is the people 8767 s ignorance to social gathering such as, family function, birthday parties etc. and made people less gregarious. In other words, people have completely transformed themselves into introvert personality and they stopped aiding people at the time help as they are mostly indulge with the people on networking sites. Therefore, it would not be wrong to say that people have become more callous and selfish.
In further examples, the essay shows how technology allows for the linking of ideas that may never have been connected in the past (like medicine and economic models), pushing people to think in new ways. Examples are persuasive and fully developed reasoning is logically sound and well supported.
Is paraphrasing the question as introduction is a must?
What if I find it easier to have a hook for my introduction rather than paraphrasing the question, will it be wrong? OR
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To conclude, I believe that studying a foreign language should be optional rather compulsory. The advantages of learning foreign language should be explained to parents so that the latter can make an informed decisions on foreign language studies for their children.